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from boone168/Bunhamin (10,898) 
on November 4, 2009 7:05:00 AM CST
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Hi, David. Nice portrait. Exposure is well done here. Nice expression and smile. The eyes are very sharp. The background pattern and colour are supporting your main image too. Thanks for sharing.
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from stainedglass/Kevin (1,702) 
on November 3, 2009 9:53:55 AM CST
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Great natural pose and light is excellent - soft box worked well here. Only crit is the dof, with hair and right hand out of focus. Thanks for sharing.
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from duss/Luca (616)
on November 3, 2009 7:54:13 AM CST
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This is a very good portrait, the light and the skin color is perfect and the expression of the model is very very nice! Thank you for sharing, this is a great photo!
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from jazzcollector/Adam (339)
on November 3, 2009 7:46:33 AM CST
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I love her expression, she is really enjoying this photo shoot. I'm seeing a blue color cast most noticeable on her left arm. That is a minor nit-pic on a very professional looking image.
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from stacy81/Stacy (251)
on November 3, 2009 7:46:04 AM CST
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good portrait, some changes i would make are
skin tones are a little blue the lips should be fully closed if possible I like to see better hand placement if possible
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From foreverimages/David (10,959)
on November 3, 2009 7:49:28 AM CST
thanx - I tried to shift the bue out a little, maybe a little more. Thanx for the critique!
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from gfhj/Gf (1,486)
on November 3, 2009 7:41:52 AM CST
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Hello David,beautyful shot i really like your photo its look very clear. And i like the blue eyes .Cheers GF
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From sheena/Administrator (0) 
on November 3, 2009 8:40:43 AM CST
Great background, good job matching her eyes to it. Very nice work.
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From hivewasp/Guillaume (2,847)
on November 3, 2009 1:40:44 PM CST
"1000 watt" seem a bit low powered; I'd guess 1000 joules or 1000 Watt second would be 3600x more accurate ;)
Love the similarity of tones between her eyes and the background; and it gives great results with her hair colour too. I'm not sure if I like the framing; it feels a bit too tight for me.
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From foreverimages/David (10,959)
on November 3, 2009 4:41:03 PM CST
it is a 1000w continuous light with a 42" sq softbox about 2' away up and too our left.
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