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Arrows

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Title     Arrows
Photographer     philippeboivin/Philippe (614) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user
Portfolio     Montreal
Categories     Snapshot
Urban
Street Photography
Content advisory     G (general audiences)
Submitted     October 31, 2009 8:39:47 AM CDT
Views     147
Rating     4 Thumb-up

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Thumb-up    from icster/Peter (135) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2009 10:07:10 AM CDT (2) Early critique

hello, interesting photo with good composition. Photographer have so many chances taking pictures like this one, however many of them are just to blind to do it. I would prefer this photo to have a little more color or a little higher contrast. Also I see that the focus is not on the subject (which is the old guy) Overall, good job... Thank you for sharing...

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From philippeboivin/Philippe (614) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 31, 2009 10:11:41 AM CDT

Thanks for your comment Peter. Focus was on the arrows (f/7.1, 1/200). I guess the speed was not fast enough? or the aperture?

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Thumb-up Thumb-up    from chuckgallagher/Chuck (1,002) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 31, 2009 9:47:50 AM CDT (1) Early critique

Hi Philippe, Excellent timing on this shot. The colors also add to the light mood of the photo. I agree that the photo could be leveled but that is a minor point to me and does not detract from the photo. Regards, Chuck

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From philippeboivin/Philippe (614) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 31, 2009 10:12:14 AM CDT

Thanks Chuck, I will play with the levels to see, interesting.

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Thumb-up    from pilotlee/Pilot (11,450) Send mail to this user on October 31, 2009 8:45:54 AM CDT (3) Early critique

The image could be potentially developed as a very interesting picture. I would suggest to straighten both the horizon and the vertical first. Heighten up slightly the contrast might be also helpful too.

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From philippeboivin/Philippe (614) This user is a Premium Member Send mail to this user on October 31, 2009 10:13:09 AM CDT

Thanks Pilot, I agree about your points, this is helpful.

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