Curves
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mikewebb/Mike (4,864)
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from digitalcolour/David (3,189) 
on November 21, 2009 2:16:13 AM CST
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I liked the look of the thumbnail, unfortunately once opened sadly the larger image failed to impress. I find the pool of light on the left draws your eye away from the main subject the car. The green and blue reflection on the bodywork is also rather distracting, but the biggest problem of all is that I cannot find anywhere where the car body work is sharp.
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The Last Path
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ebn50/Evan (12,431)
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from mikewebb/Mike (4,864)
on November 21, 2009 2:14:01 AM CST
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That is an awful lot of white and for me the small kink in the line on the left makes it seem even bigger. How does it look if you crop from the left by about 10% to lose that levelling off bit of edge? This would also de centre it a bit as Lee suggested. You do like to test us :)Mike
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Red
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sarbaazz/Zulqarnain (143)
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from mikewebb/Mike (4,864)
on November 21, 2009 2:10:30 AM CST
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I think I can see what you are trying to do which is set up repeated shapes as seen most strongly in the foreground. I would prefer more depth of field so that more of eh foreground flower is in focus and also that the lighting on the flowers at the back was a little more consistent with the one at the front. I think this drops into the category of nice try but it didn't quite work.Mike
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Myself and a blue door in Malta
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mrwais/Aurelio (2)
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from mikewebb/Mike (4,864)
on November 21, 2009 2:08:14 AM CST
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The focus is in the wrong place but dare I suggest the knob is too big and overwhelms the viewer to the extent that you don't really get a sense of what you're looking at? If you weren't so close then the top left area could have included all that lumpy bit round the mounting.Mike
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Breathing Out
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hankbenson/Hank (44,008)
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from mikewebb/Mike (4,864)
on November 21, 2009 2:04:42 AM CST
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You do these difficult shots so well. Here it all seems to come together with colour, shape, texture and the right amount of blur.Mike
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Sunset Vert Le Grand sept 2009
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eric91/Eric (214)
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from mikewebb/Mike (4,864)
on November 21, 2009 2:03:04 AM CST
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A very dramatic sky well captured although that black mass of cloud looms very large and detracts from the composition. The bit I like best of all is the lighter cloud in the top which has interesting texture, shape and colour.Mike
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Friends
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horea/Horea (298)
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from chalom/Rina (1,046)
on November 21, 2009 1:53:29 AM CST
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Hi, Horea! Very good photo! Path bends create movement illusion. It seems that it not a photo, and a small film. Touching dialogue of a small animal and the adult person. Fine mood! Regards.
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Mausoleum Ataturk
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jmrosz/Jan (109,507)
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from mkgonc/Mehmet Kursat (0)
on November 21, 2009 1:52:09 AM CST
Harika,tebrikler
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prohibited gifts of nature III.
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stefan11/Joze (1,124)
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from chalom/Rina (1,046)
on November 21, 2009 1:47:39 AM CST
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Hi, Joze! The successful shot, very much is pleasant To me a shot composition. Good light and colour. It is possible to see in it something comic - the high elegant gentleman raises a hat at a meeting with ladies:) Regards.
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Stella
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khmueller/K.H. (8,525)
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from jondee/John (500)
on November 21, 2009 1:47:23 AM CST
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I have to second the previous critique. The geometric distortion doesn't work well for me. I'll add that the angle of her gaze exposing mostly the lower whites of her eyes adds a rather death-like air. Sorry, because normally I really enjoy your work.
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La Gomera
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iourib/Iouri (985)
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from jmrosz/Jan (109,507)
on November 21, 2009 1:42:49 AM CST
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Well seen and good photographed, the view is made in a good composition. The colours are great, also from the background. Therefore the lighting is well done.
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Puppy Staredown
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apexmi/Bob (705)
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from dare69/Phil (201)
on November 21, 2009 1:42:15 AM CST
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Nice photo of a very cute puppy,The photo would be better with a plain back ground or blur out the picture that is in the back ground.
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Lava Sunrise
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hugeknot/Tony (635)
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from jmrosz/Jan (109,507)
on November 21, 2009 1:40:15 AM CST
Beautiful, it lookes like a landscape from an other wordl. Good atmosphere and beautiful colours. Lighting and composition are well done. Thanks for sharing...
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DSC 1222
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jim1952/James (672)
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from chalom/Rina (1,046)
on November 21, 2009 1:38:11 AM CST
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Hi, James! A successful shot. I very much like a shot composition. It is possible not to reflect at all on, where this house and whose it is windows - all harmoniously as lines, stains, high quality. really it is pleasant to me, but it is interesting to look, how it was colour?. Regards.
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Fork Attack
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angedazur/Jean (12,569)
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from djerzinski/Laurentiu (328)
on November 21, 2009 1:37:56 AM CST
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I have to say it: it's probably me the one who does not see "the attack" here. In my opinion, the fork is very friendly, has no intention to harm or something. for me, the fork tries to make a connection here, to communicate in a very intimate way (I said intimate, do not read between the lines!). it looks like the fork has a secret to share or a confidence to make. maybe the fork position or the composition itself gave me that approach/vision, sorry if I misled here. in...
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